Some people think that young people should spend their time with family instead of outside entertainment, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, there are some statements that argue adolescents would rather spend their leisure time with their family than that of exterior fun out. I unequivocally agree with this supposition and in this essay, I shall give some examples to support my view.
On the one hand, it is time for contemporary expansion, that means everybody has to work hard to satisfy the essential necessities. Hence, they do not have too much square time to use for family members. Thus, it broadens the communication crevice between guardians and youth. So, at whatever point youngsters have leisure time, they ought to invest for their family. In addition, parents make up a crucial role for a youth’s growth, and are willing to support when they face tough circumstances in their life. Moreover, utilizing time for guardians is the best way to approach appreciation and gratitude toward them.
On the other hand, a few individuals believe getting time to go out is a way to approach opportunities for their job and improve their communication skills. According to them, hanging out without families makes them feel more unwinds after a work of frenzied plan. That point has become a common trend in numerous countries for most youngsters. Furthermore, some youths who feel disappointed with family issues and hang out with their companions at bars or eateries on friday night are alternatives to overcome those situations.
To reiterate, youthful individuals are frequently in both situations and they need to choose one option as a priority. I believe that investing time for family members is more crucial than that of fun out with companions.
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...ions at bars or eateries on friday night are alternatives to overcome those situa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15355805243 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8774332976 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0882870105 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185285815801 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632813092957 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531794864404 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126279535771 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057953535127 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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