People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
In today’s world, the development of communication and transportation are extremely enhancing. It is true that they can bring so many positive changes into our life by making chances for employees which can promote the advancing of the world. However, there are some drawbacks of this argument. I hold a belief that they are more likely to have good effect.
Let's start by looking at the pros at this issue when the technology in both are especially I’m proving that is the opportunities for people who want to oversea throughout too many continent, they can carry out some demanding about experience and explore the world, people are able to select the most suitable place for them to live and even work. Moreover, they will not worry about keep in touch with their parents because there are too many communication devices, tor a instance like mobile phone, telephone, facetime, so on, so everyone unnecessary to anxiety when they feel lonely or depress if they have challenges, In addition, the distance in geographic probably solute by the advance transport, they may go by plane or other transports to go back and visit their family and their hometown whenever they miss.
On the other hand, the idea of live and work any place they pick out is cons to some extent. The first drawback relates to that the homesick will appear and gonna make them will depression in the first time or even when they get troubles, the only thing which can help them are themselve people can't rely on anyone in their family because they’re so far away from them. Another disadvantage is the cos of transport and the time zone different to someone who have to long distance with their hometown. The cost of moving will also limit them to visit their family, that may really expense that lead them to ponder about the movement.
To sum up, while there are apparent both benefits and drawbacks in the effects of communication technology and transportation our life. I belive that the advantage outweigh disadvantages in some aspects. In my view point, although there are the distance of people who want to go far from them hometown but in that place they will have an appropriate life and successful work so as the way I see that thing are deserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...re are some drawbacks of this argument. I hold a belief that they are more likely...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ey are more likely to have good effect. Lets start by looking at the pros at this is...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...n the technology in both are especially I’m proving that is the opportunities for...
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Suggestion: many continents
...ople who want to oversea throughout too many continent, they can carry out some demanding abou...
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Suggestion: an
...are too many communication devices, tor a instance like mobile phone, telephone, ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hich can help them are themselve people cant rely on anyone in their family because ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...technology and transportation our life. I belive that the advantage outweigh disa...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are the distances'?
Suggestion: there are the distances
...ome aspects. In my view point, although there are the distance of people who want to go far from them ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... life and successful work so as the way I see that thing are deserve.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deserved'.
Suggestion: deserved
...work so as the way I see that thing are deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, in my view, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79586563307 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59523131546 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532299741602 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.110944769 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.769230769 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7692307692 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278391407902 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978448794839 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492487312046 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174949103934 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378573004077 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.