In some countries traditional medicine remains popular. Some people believe that these treatments are ineffective and should always be replaced by modern medicine, while others feel they can still be useful in certain cases. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A topical issue in modern society is using medicine effectively to heal diseases. It is often said that natural medicine is not safe for consumers; however, others feel that it is preferable in some situations, rather than conventional medicine. This essay will examine both sides of this argument and provide an overall opinion.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people believe that herbal medicine is a useful method to treat certain illnesses. Firstly, most medical treatments are created from natural ingredients. To elaborate, these only treat mild symptoms such as stomach ache and insomnia. Secondly, people feel that traditional medicine has no side-effects. This is because after they use these therapies, they overcome sicknesses easily and recover quickly.
On the other hand, others claim that they prefer using modern medicine for a number of reasons. First of all, western medicine is more convenient for users. For example, patients may purchase it ready to use from drug stores near their house. Furthermore, conventional medicine is an effective treatment in some emergency cases at home. For instance, if a member of the family has a serious illness like heart disease, there will always be modern medicine in the house ready for relieving symptoms without going to the hospital.
In conclusion, the choice between traditional and modern medicine is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I am of the opinion that medicine is an indispensable part of human life which helps people treat diseases and stay healthy; however, conventional medicine will be chosen more and more because it is produced in laboratories with a higher safety level. If medical technology grows rapidly, western medicine will be replaced with traditional medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'readies'?
Suggestion: readies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29577464789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76144352167 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6972081711 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340103251026 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1065724561 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562015851159 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194748913107 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211864831849 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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