In modern days, while many young people enjoy healthier and wealthier lives compared to the previous generations, they seem to be much less happy. As this trend could severely affect the mental wellness of millions people, it is essential for society to identify the roots of the problem and solutions to deal with it.
There is a variety of reasons for the unhappiness of youngsters. Among those, the most popular cause is probably the work-related stress. Although it is true that the average income of people these days is significantly higher than in the past, people have to earn it at the extend of their mental health. In particular, they have to deal with heavy workloads in order to secure the well-paid jobs, which is likely to result in anxiety and depression later in their lives. Another reason making young people unhappy is the development of the media, which tells people about the public figures who achieve success in their early ages. As youngsters tend to be competitive, they are placed under substantial pressure when being aware of the more successful people.
Having discussed the causes of the issue, some measures could be given accordingly. First of all, it is of great importance to clarify to young people that specific achievements such as standing out from others may not be as satisfactory as it seems. Many people could suffer from disappointment when they are not satisfied despite having their goals accomplished; thus, this measure can prevent them from getting disappointed. Another feasible solution for young people is to attend yoga or meditation classes, which have a reputation of relieving stress. These practices is becoming increasingly popular nowadays as a treatment of mental illnesses, so it could be worthwhile for people to try.
In conclusion, the fame and fortune that many people are striving for are seemingly causing counterproductivities to them. In order to avoid this problem, the youngs should set realistic targets for themselves as well as taking different methods to enhance the resilience of their minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in the past, people have to earn it at the extend of their mental health. In particular, ...
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...on of relieving stress. These practices is becoming increasingly popular nowadays ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enhance the resilience of their minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15430267062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87331692078 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0138245061 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242183448002 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778979741957 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476920957928 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142315554966 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460420896504 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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