These days, it is true that humans enjoy tremendous benefits from scientific advances. As a result, many people suggest that the education system should focus on promoting students’ knowledge in science rather than in other fields, so that the country could develop rapidly. Nevertheless, in my opinion, although scientific education plays an essential role in the growth of nations, the importance of other subjects, such as geography, should not be overlooked.
On the one hand, scientific findings are one of the decisive factors which contribute to a country’s development. For example, the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries witnessed the introduction of great scientists such as Isaac Newton and Michael Faraday, and their theories that are considered the basis of science in the modern world. As those renowed people originated mostly from European countries, the countries have successfully applied their findings in practice, significantly improving their productivities and making them the earliest developed countries. Recently, other governments have seen the importance of scientific research, accordingly trying to promote the research in order to benefit from them.
On the other hand, social subjects such as literature and geography also provide students crucial understandings about the world, thus, they cannot be neglected. At the elementary level, they show students the appropriate behaviour in specific circumstances, which may be even more important than teaching them about machines and computers. Furthermore, the subjects also help learners to understand management, which is essential to a nation since it is rather difficult for organizations to operate without proper regulations.
All in all, a country would have to promote the study of sciene in order to acquire favourable achievements. However, it is also desired that the government, to develop the comprehensive knowledge of students, so that the country could possess knowledgeable leaders in the future.
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- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- In many countries people now wear western style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention in the last one hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss knowledgeable leaders in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77027027027 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15933114205 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2676656033 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192160603615 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621376352081 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543163057539 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10490826242 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379577002248 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss knowledgeable leaders in the future.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77027027027 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15933114205 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2676656033 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192160603615 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621376352081 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543163057539 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10490826242 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379577002248 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.