Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that boxing is often considered a violent sport and boxers are usually seriously injured after a match. As a result, many people suggest that this sport should not exist in the modern day. In my opinion, I think that although boxing seems to be inappropriate, it does not necessarily have to be vanished.
On the one hand, boxing appears to be a bloody sport. After an intense match, fighters could have their bones broken, or even die in some cases. Therefore, people think it goes against the aims of sports, which are promoting health and encouraging people to make friends with others; thus, it should be banned. However, there are measures that can be taken to prevent the serious consequences of boxing. By equipping fighters with more protection and prohibitting the dangerous attacks, the major injuries are hopefully reduced.
On the other hand, boxing can offer people many valueable benefits. To begin with, practicing boxing is a great way of learning self-defence. Boxing has shown to be one of the most effective martial arts in terms of practical combat, which can help people to protect their lives and properties in many situations. In addition, the sport also gains people fitness. As practicing boxing burns a substantial amount of calories, people can lose their weight after a short time doing this sport.
In conclusion, even though boxing could be seen as a violent sport, the threats that it poses could be minimized with some appropriate methods. Furthermore, doing it regularly can give people considerable advantages. Thus, I hold a firm belief that boxing should only be regulated instead of banned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, therefore, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03676470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70616206994 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1585052235 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197838959773 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737312978731 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698577780644 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134353411302 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640187177755 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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