In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.
In many countries, parents frequently teach their children that hard work will help them achieve their goals. In my perspective, this message results in both advantages and disadvantages for children.
On the one hand, the first benefit is that this advice will motivate children, and help them to keep their enthusiasm for their life. Success requires people to spend a lot of time and money to achieve and on the long road to success, people may lose their motivation, they may wonder why they still achieve nothing. Therefore, the juveniles who are told this message could be trusted in themself and not give up since they understand that success will come when they try hard enough. The second benefit is that this message can help children's mental health when they are unsuccessful in their work and study. On the road to success, failure is a significant factor to achieve goals, everything needs several attempts, learning from failure to get better and better. However, humans, especially children, may feel upset and unconfident when they are not successful although they try constantly. From that, this advice will comfort children and remind them not to stop trying.
On the other hand, this message also has drawbacks when children may be misleading. To achieve something, in addition to trying, it is also necessary to have plans for future ambition and to be fortunate in some conditions. Because of that, children may waste their time chasing a goal without a plan, and they may received no success. For instance, a businessman wants to sell his products, but he has no plan for advertisement and financial issues, so he just keeps improving the quality of his products and the public still does not notice.
In conclusion, teaching children like this may bring some advantages and disadvantages, parents should teach them a wide view of this message to not harm them in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01577287066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64565915878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3279044279 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366166324172 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135326772774 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830736580604 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214079734438 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792171880657 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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