It is debatable issue among people of different culture that which age group should be reversed more . While, some of the culture respect their older generation for contribution in society. According to me youth should be given more importance and attention.
On the one hand some nations give more preference to grey haired people. Firstly, old age people are more wise as campared to youngster counterparts. Owning to this, mainly they are associated with wisdom. Being, an experienced person they guide the young - ones so that they get easily success in their life. Therefore, it should be vital to give value to 60 year old people. For instance, in the far east masses respect their older like a boss, due to their knowledge. Secondly, with the guidance of their grand parents, youth stay connected to their roots. Because, they give them knowledge according to their experience as well as advice them to tankle the problems in coming years.
On the other hand, if grey haired people give contribution to the society, young adult also plays a very crucial role in the progress of nation. Because, young- man are very creative and dynamic. As a result, they shape their ideas and helpful to make a world better. In addition to this, they have courage to accomplish their goal and make the planet wonderfulto reside youngster act as a assets for any nation. For example after a lot of hardwork, a young man mahinder singh dhoni set a world record in cricket.
In conclusion, there have been ongoing debate whether youth deserve more priority as compare to old age masses or not. But according to me young man should be given more attention.
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 79
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 61
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face it is a positive or a negative development 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87544483986 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51182323278 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.180250943 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20199388688 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639162276915 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623538179652 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127521069489 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662512352686 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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