In some developed countries, people become fat because they eat too much junk food. Suggest some ways that governments and food companies can encourage people to stay fit and eat a healthy diet
It is true that unhealthy food is being consumed more and more especially in some industrialized nations. This growing phenomenon results in the gravity of obesity health problems all over the world. To address that serious problem, national authorities and food corporations need to promote some specific programs.
To begin with, one of the most effective measures is to educate individuals to aware of the detriment of an imbalanced diet on their physical appearance, mental health, resistance. For instance, governments can show many TVCs and fund some projects about the adverse of junk food to prevent an individual from trying that type of food. In this way, an individual could have knowledge about food which leads to choosing the right diet. Moreover, to reduce obesity, practicing and work out also plays an important role. Many sports events should be raised fund to be held and attract more and more people to participate in.
On the other hand, there are other solutions that can be used is to impose heavy taxes on not only junk food but also those companies related to that kind of food. With that increasing price of that, people may not purchase for that meal which would result in the adjustment of those companies to become friendlier to the customers. However, this measure could easily trigger social disagreement and resentment so it must be utilized to a decent extent and when the problem goes to the point of desperation.
To conclude, to effectively solve that gravity problem depends largely on each individual. However, to speed up that process, the government and food companies should join hands together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, kind of, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08148148148 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69929625539 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3126358195 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217497925557 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703954676576 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615723446771 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121297495567 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251680065238 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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