Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said by some education experts that every child should learn to play a musical instrument. In my point of view, I completely agree with this idea due to these following reasons.
On the one hand, playing a musical instrument can help children to decompress after a hard-working time at school. There are some students have emotion problems after living from school. In some cases psychologists recommend them to play musical instruments like piano, violin, guitar, etc. Then, they can recharge their battery and have more energy for the next day. Many studies have consistently illustrated that learning a musical instrument can improve children’s critical thinking, problem-solving skills.
On the other hand, children who learn to play musical instruments can boost their confidence because they will have chances to enroll in many competitions, performance in front of crowd. Moreover, those who have learnt musical instrument can have much ability to connect with their feeling and express themselves more emotionally. Some researchers confirm that music can express our soul, our feelings then parents can know one of the charactleristic of their children.
In conclusion, playing instruments brings children many merits that can not be denied. I personally think that parents should encourage their kids to play them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45893719807 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91956153035 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6406152114 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210227451532 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947110524022 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834880126408 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156054439149 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571926337377 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s idea due to these following reasons. On the one hand, playing a musical instr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ical thinking, problem-solving skills. On the other hand, children who learn to...
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... have learnt musical instrument can have much ability to connect with their feeli...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the charactleristic of their children. In conclusion, playing instruments bring...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45893719807 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91956153035 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6406152114 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210227451532 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947110524022 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834880126408 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156054439149 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571926337377 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.