Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. To what extant do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The world has been more globalized in recent years, and people have had more opportunities to travel to other regions. Some education policymakers thought that students travel to other countries school arrangements to get international exposure. I believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, students get more awareness from experiences however it is to city or country. At the schooling age, pupils are in the middle of the habit developing stage if school arranges international exchange trips that help students learn new cultures and improve their skills. For example, Suppose a trip is placed from an underdeveloped country to a first-world country like America, where most recent technologies are born. In that case, that gives a chance to students to learn it and apply it in their region's development. Similar, pupils from modern counties visit poor areas, which helps them understand what kind of problems this class faces. In addition, the culture is exchanged between two countries, and these students are ambassadors for cultures. Secondly, it reduces racism between nationalities. Although, each positive thing has negatives in it.
On the other hand, these programs are caused some problems in students that will continue their whole lives. For instance, in most cases, poor students are inspired by the rich if the modern school student visits an ordinary school, which reduces the confidence of local pupils. Maybe due to this, the local culture will suppress.
In conclusion, these programs give a vast understanding between countries teenagers and students learn and exchange problems and solutions; however, it affects some students' confidence although overall advantages are much higher than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2777.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.2472324723 5.12529762239 200% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88722692246 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4975432678 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.133333333 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159706399129 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483895693445 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470308104745 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981398161958 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116419972324 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 13.0946893788 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 41.87 12.4159519038 337% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.