Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, the trend has been changed towards spend lives in a country. Nowadays, significant number of people move from nattive region to other region however where they deal everyday life in other language that makes some difficulties to communicate with other and the facing physical issues. I agree with this argument, in the course of the essay, I will describe point of view.
Firstly, when people are not able speak that language which makes hard to extend their new relationship because without language they will do not communicate and deliver their message to others, Moreover, this situation creates numerous mental problems and stress. For example, a person migrate from a country to other country where the language is different from he spend time alone with in that city or country may because serious pressure to their mind. These social issues also cause some other problems.
Secondly, if individuals do not communicate properly then this lake of knowledge of other language is a large barrier between jobs and work. Without language anyone does not offer the work in their shops or factories because the miscommunication is a danger to create big issues or damage to that place or factories. In addition, this gap in communication is also problem to that person. For instance, he has health issues, some illnesses, he is not able to explain his disease to doctor because doctor have other language. Due to this miscommunication, he will face long term problems until he learn that way of communication.
In conclusion, without knowing language that place, moving their makes mental and practical issues for long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...where the language is different from he spend time alone with in that city or country...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...e will face long term problems until he learn that way of communication. In conclu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1375464684 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70252297097 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9291378368 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201624925501 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073410252682 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378178592628 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115416180232 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526440270752 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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