Some experts believe is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary schooldo the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school
do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning a foreign language can be very useful in life,Specially if its English,Since its the international language,it is spoken by many people around the world,Now the idea that kids should start learning another language from a younger age,is a splendid idea if you ask me

The more a child grows the less he/she will be excited about learning a different language,Specially in secondary school where the atmosphere doesn't really help the case,besides the more a person,specially a teenage person,practices on learning a different language,the better he/she will learn,the more they learn the better they can make use of it,and believe that the length of studying overcomes the amount in such a topic,for example I myself have watched English cartoons ever since since I was just a kid,everyday all I watched were English cartoons,and even now I watch English language movies,as a result I am way more interested in English language than all my other friends who started from secondary school,so I was rewarded with the ability to speak,write or read English notes better than all my other friends combined,even though they attended extra classes and I didn't

Although it does have its disadvantages,like not learning your local language as good as you could have,but with hard work and dedication they can overcome these obstacles easily

Overall in my opinion,the entire idea is great,and the pros overcome the cons of the situation,only in one condition,that it's managed properly so it doesn't get out of hand and interfere with the children's main activites

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, really, second, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26294820717 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26784556275 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 20.2975951904 1237% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1321.0 106.682146367 1238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 20.7667163134 1209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 7.06120827912 1090% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151040945472 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151040945472 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739357746372 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469492442751 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.8 13.0946893788 984% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -183.29 50.2224549098 -365% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 101.2 11.3001002004 896% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.71 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.8 8.58950901804 231% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 10.1190380762 1012% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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