Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate among people about spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history, geography, etc. Although there are many valid arguments to claim that it is an issue, some spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a good job. I am highly inclined to believe that teaching skills can be helpful to improve interest for the future. Taking advantage of some academic research, this essay is going examine the reasons why I agree to teaching skills during study of academic education.
Firstly, a series of individuals think that the students should be informed about teaching skills after spending training courses. For example, a research project conducted by Harvard university researchers studied a large number of students who study courses which related to social life. The results revealed that providing extra courses for finding a job would be useful. Hence, academic research suggests that more teaching traditional is not useful for the student's future.
Secondly, our country needs to have economic growth. For instance, an experiment conducted by the National Development Organization indicated that spending more time for traditional subjects can devastate the student's life.
To conclude, while there are many people believing in more time teaching traditional subjects. I believe it is not helpful for our country's growth.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... traditional subjects can devastate the students life. To conclude, while there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65578867545 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9261230481 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429368638769 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158305182768 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120255259813 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255558071057 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108739127515 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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