Learning foreign language play significant role in education process of many students. But, some experts give the view of point that children should expose soon with foreign language such as primary school. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point even some drawbacks still exist.
whenever adult looks at their child's schedule, people easily realize that the government and parents sometimes put a lot of pressure on their shoulder, we require our children must be good at math, science and so on. Sometimes, It is overwhelm. I believe foreign language subject is put in primary school's curriculum which bring a lot of benefits. In young age, many scientists demonstrate this period that children can learn quickly and effectively. They easily memorize longer and understand deeply. In addition, as they have a change learning another language in primary school that mean they also can decline a part of stress when step to a higher education. Because they have a strong background so they can pay more attention in some other subject such as: chemistry, physic, biology ... And, I think some student are really enjoy the time when they learn foreign language with their friends.
To sum up, my viewpoint is we should let our child learn foreign language as long as teacher and parent can arrange a suitable curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whenever
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'overwhelmed'.
Suggestion: overwhelmed
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
..... And, I think some student are really enjoy the time when they learn foreign langua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, even so, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09589041096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5670190449 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639269406393 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4452901304 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214652565491 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793824402722 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665425634235 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142189206974 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610810973676 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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