Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, learning English is a trend for children when they just begin the first lesson in primary school. Because of such a trend, the parents have to prepare a lot of thing for their kid. I think that study foreign langue earlier should be good but it still has some disadvantage due to the children are forced unnaturally.
From city to country, once the living condition is much improving, the parents want to spend all the best thing for their son that will bring a bright future. Learning English is one of such invisible requirement. They try to help the kid emerged into an English environment, following many methods on the internet to keep their kid in the right way. Especially, children can study foreign langue from primary school. in this time, they can improve speaking skill easier and much faster and in secondary school. Besides, if we can give the children a suitable way to enjoy a new langue, it will be much better for them in higher degree when they have a lot of need-to-lessons. As a result, the children will think that the new langue is interesting and funny. it can help them to have more chance of learning more and more. Next, if we begin learning new langue from secondary school, we even cannot know where to start, because others know much better than us. Let image that if you were children. In addition, having a new langue will have children brain have more link and they will be more clever for communication.
However, if we applied a wrong method to force the children too soon, it will have a terrible effect on them. Every single day, the children have to speak, writing new langue as a necessary mission, they will become boring and lead to scaring it, then it is hard to require the kid learn more and more such dislike thing. Moreover, in the age of development native langue, the children have to learn another, it will be so dangerous if the children mix that langue together without any long and meaning sentences. In Vietnam, there are a lot such cases when they are trying becoming a normal state on the hospital after many efforts form both parent and the kid to learning a new langue.
In summary, learning foreign language soon will be better for the future of the kid, it is a perfect time or doing such a thing. However, the parents need to consider carefully a suitable, natural method to help the kid leaning well and protect them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a lot of things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, third, well, i think, in addition, in summary, as a result, in the second place, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58013544018 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40615536514 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492099322799 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0989816595 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.45 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211322581429 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764871795992 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840653472402 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130352335576 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605033014876 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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