Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
media have become an essential element of entertainment and information in everyone's life. many scholars and policy makers have been doing a constant debate over the behavioral impact of films and television programs. There are many arguments and evidences supporting and opposing the negative impact of these contents. In this essay we will try and analyses how this cannot be the main reason of violent behavior in people.
Crime and violence were always present since the beginning, but invention of television happened less than half a century ago. majority of well-directed graphic content always convey some valuable message to audience which
shows
the positive sides in all situations and undesirable ending of violent actions. Actors playing positive roles has been glamorized as Heroes. positive roles are mostly played by big celebrities, who are role models for many people. Seeing them doing good has always motivated people to do good, choose peace over violence and maintain harmony.
To oppose all the positive impact policy makers has some contradictory view to this discussion, which indicate the negative behavioral impact of these media content like movies and
shows
. In some films when director glamorize the violent incident. audience loves fight & action scenes and unconsciously admire the dominating side, this leaves a strong impression of bad behavior on people. If some popular celebrities start doing negative roles this can impact its follower in many ways. these followers can try to replicate their actions. like Sanjay Dutt doing movies like Vastav.
media
show
all kind of content but in majority of them they always end it on a positive and happy not, in favor of non-violent behavior. it totally depends on the viewer that what kind of content they prefer and what part of the content they get influenced by the most.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Some people believe that violence in the media such as in television programs and films directly results in violent behaviour To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3468013468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61084295468 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1246733036 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080482326259 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263819559026 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245578124247 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422393431345 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245039446081 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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