Some feel that individuals should have the right to strike in all jobs while others feel there are exceptions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Working becomes people’s significant aspect to fulfil their lives. Some people think striking in all jobs is a part of human rights, while others feel that they should concede some exclusion. This view appears on both sides of arguments which I will elaborate in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, objectors of resigning from jobs debate that workers will find a hard chance to meet a job security. Along with incapability of achieving financial dependency, they lack a sense of dedication and passion to their work due to settling in different job positions. Furthermore, the professional job responsibilities in one workplace cannot be simply replaced, primarily doctors. While patient treatment journey in each hospital has specific diagnoses, this requires ones to address the problems in which they are involved in. Recorded by American Association of Colleges of Nursing, staffing shortages threats folks to treat their emergency conditions.
On the other hand, exponents of this view state that this circumstance may contribute to skill developments and multinational networks. Considering that, different occupations will provide a wealth of expert insight as well as pleasant work atmosphere. As opposed to this, the Times of India reports that 76% of Indian workers experience heavy work pressure. Furthermore, companies and agencies possibly recruit experts in particular fields, opening greater opportunities. Diverse talents employed can foster novel creativity and innovation leading to enhance organizational performances. According to NASA, worldwide scientists collaborate in various projects and missions.
Overall, it seems to me that leaving out of jobs brings some positive impacts to several parts of society, including good workers quality and greater company reputation. This is as long as certain professions, before quitting the jobs, train exact candidates to substitute them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... elaborate in the following paragraph. On the one hand, objectors of resigning ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75087719298 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0763626878 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9824156908 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144323388604 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392051868805 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803205979137 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940365978681 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1004051394 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... elaborate in the following paragraph. On the one hand, objectors of resigning ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75087719298 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0763626878 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9824156908 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144323388604 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392051868805 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803205979137 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940365978681 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1004051394 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.