Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school.
which of these two school policies you think is better?
There is no doubt that the type of clothes students wear represents the school where they are studying. While some institutions demand every single pupil to wear certain uniform, others claim that clothing is no compulsory for reaching academic pursuits. This essays support the former view and will explain firstly that the use of a uniform is paramount for the value of the school as a serious institution and secondly will discuss how proper wearing permit an school a global recognizment.
To commence with, the compulsory use of uniforms represent the seriousness and exigence of every educational institute. It plays a foremost role for the achievment of a high level education. To say in other words, if every student wear the same cloth when learning, there is more likely to be focused on their academic pursuits and less likely to distract. Therefore, pupils can achieve better scores in exams than if every single one is wearing diverse clothes. For example, it is extremely common to see a lot of learners get distracted in a classroom where everyone is wearing different and colourful t-shirts due that colours attract attention.
On the other hand, not permiting to learners decide for their own uniform to wear during classes allows the school to be recognized everywhere. This is because uniforms represent the face of the institute and therefore any place that students might go, people is able to know where they come from. Hence, proper wearing enhances the quality of the institution. To illustrate this, anyone in the world recognizes the uniform of the Harvard school due to the fact that it has a particular red shield in the jacket.
To conclude, although the academic future of any student depends on itself, the use of uniforms are important for the exigence of the learning as it enhances better studying environment, also it permit the school to be renombred in every place in the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.021875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6802791803 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2433026276 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327220721118 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1141643989 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839928376308 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209194976788 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786680350587 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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