Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?
I think that the issue of whether all students are required to wear school uniform is the one that is open for debate. Some people think that all students must wear the school uniform. However, others think that students can decide what to wear to school themselves. Individually, I believe that students should wear what they like. Because of several reasons below.
First of all, if students do not have school uniforms they can wear what they like to wear. Personally, I like to wear clothes which are comfortable. In addition, I am a girl and I like to wear jeans or shirts , and as far as I know female students in Vietnam must wear skirts or AoDai all the time at school. This will make them feel uncomfortable. I think many female students will agree with me that jeans and T-shirts are much more comfortable than uniforms. Moreover, not all students are having a perfect body, some people look so good in the school uniform but the others do not look suitable because of their skin tone or their body shape.
Second of all, I believe that school uniforms can cause students uncreativity . For example, when students study IT or some other disciplines that require so much student's creativity. And how boring students will get in everyday life, when they have to wear the same clothes, with the same colours. This absolutely decreases a student's creativity, one element that is needed for student education.
In short, I think that students should wear to school what they want. Otherwise, if a school requires students to wear school uniforms, I think that uniforms must be comfortable for all students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8309352518 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55160763649 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7343003133 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53272501664 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220897601187 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156533402935 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.417159513225 0.151304729494 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113817778549 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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