Some hold the view that ideas and informaton should be completely open and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media.
Today, in our fast-paced world, opennes in mass media is seen as one of the bright sign of democracy. Although, there exist some aspects which should be limited to some extent, many people hold the view there shouldn't be any kind of restriction in getting any information from all types of media. I am in favour of the idea of putting some limit to the liberty of the media in some cases. In this essay, I wil support my opinions with examples.
Firstly, without any control, complete freedom of mass media may lead to the loss of privacy of people. That is to say, on condition thst everything including private life is easy to access for everyone, this may ruin one's life and cause strong depression which may last for their whole life. For instance, some celebrities ended up with suicide due to the wrong interpretation of meadia.
Secondle, non-selected information on TV or newspaper may have harmful effect on children. Because of the consistant growth of their brain and high possibility of receiving every single information, this may create negative idea in their mind towards the world. Morover, watching and listening different kinds of facts more than enough might be a cuse of mental health.
On the other hand, there is a strong argument that people hav a right to be aware of everything happening around them. This is a considerable importance to raise political and social awareness of the public which keeps them updated and alerted.
In conclusion, although the noton of making mass media totally free in terms of giving information is argued by many, I believe in some circumstances, some limitations should e imposed considering the content of the information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96478873239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76651234543 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0751145073 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243258886458 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752707937691 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625080269073 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116268448796 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735531098401 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.