Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that more workers are working from home due to the pandemic caused by Covid-19, as well as the improvement of technology throughout the time. Some individuals feel that although this benefits the employees, the drawbacks for employers are noticeable. In my opinion, this is a win-win situation for both the supervisors and the subordinates. There are many reasons to support that employers benefit when their workers work from home.
To begin with, a company can save a lot of money if its workers are home-working. Construction of buildings and the works to maintaining infrastructure usually cost a lot. Moreover, the money that is used to provide facilities to workers such as electricity, meals, and sanity is also saved. On top of it, these kinds of employees might agree to work on less salary, which is another reason why employers would benefit.
In addition, online works have proved to be a boon for the employees as well. They can save time as they do not have to work daily like working at their offices. And as the employees are working from home, there might be less traffic congestion in the rush hours. Furthermore, some female employees, who might be both working and being a homemaker, might find it easier to balance their lifestyle and can actually relive the stress they got by traveling from place to place. Working from home is also beneficial for the disabled and the ones who want to earn some extra income for their home.
In conclusion, after analyzing the situation, it is clear that working from home financially benefit both the employers and employees, and in some case, it might help both the supervisors and the subordinates balance their work and their own lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91408934708 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74442464872 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0094222511 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305232224164 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110520943345 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717951652799 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185080184997 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413755745054 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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