Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that technology nowadays has become very advanced and it is possible for people to carry out their work from home. Therefore, it is argue that working from home while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback for employers. Considering things, I will go into both sides and compare each props and cons.
On one hand, there are several advantages for employees while working at home. Firstly, by working and carrying their duties from home, they can reduce their transport expenses and reduce their stress level. Without worrying about transport fees or waiting for traffic, employees can focus more on there work as well as reducing health risks from stresses. Secondly, accommodate jobs can create flexible and a more comfortable working environment which enhance the work efficiency. For instance, working in a convenient or a colorful working space, employees can "jump" over their own borders and restrictions, turning works and duties into easy tasks and enjoyment.
On the other hand, working from home can really put employers into the disadvantage sides. As a result of distant working, employers could face a difficulty of controlling works. They cannot control and mange the workers duties which could potentially lead or raise the risk of bankruptcy and failure of the company. Moreover, working from home and in a comfortable workplace with complete freedom could prevent workers and the workforce of the company meet the point of deadlines and affect the growing rate of the company.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement above as it will benefit employees a lot and enhance their creativity. However, employers and supervisors could lose the ability to mange and control the workforce to be efficient and productive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
... their work from home. Therefore, it is argue that working from home while of benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28521126761 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81734811599 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.229911718 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255623016378 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096787245816 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787910898368 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152017665088 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425935293001 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.