In some nations having a private home is more crucial than hiring a tenant. The following essay will discuss the positives and drawbacks of this case
In some nations having a private home is more crucial than hiring a tenant. The following essay will discuss the positives and drawbacks of this case.
It is an indisputable fact that today human races prefer to own distinctive houses for themselves. Why is that the case? I think it is because of their natural behaviour of ownership. Almost all people might have a tendency to own items whatever they are. From history, we can witness that ancient people conquered a land and lived in colonies separately which are now regarded as current houses.Therefore, people tend to make things private, I think.
However, not all people may afford to purchase special accommodation due to their low budgets consequently they have to rent apartment. Yet, it is vitally important to note that living in rental home has major benefits, one of them can be affordable cost with sufficient opportunities to live. Additionally, it would not be so risky if a natural disaster happens, renter does not need to worry about the accommodation since a landlord is responsible for it. These can be exact examples for advantages of living in rental house.
On the other hand, there are several disadvantages which must be considered. Renting a home does not meant that renters can do anything they want. It means they have to ask a permission from owner even for minor changes such as altering locations of furniture. This might be a view of limiting humans' freedom.
In conclusion, owning a private home is important matter rather than hiring in some states. I believe that this is because of people's natural habits of ownership inherited from their ancestors and limitations of rental accommodation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...indisputable fact that today human races prefer to own distinctive houses for the...
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...d to worry about the accommodation since a landlord is responsible for it. These ...
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Suggestion: mean
... be considered. Renting a home does not meant that renters can do anything they want....
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...iture. This might be a view of limiting humans freedom. In conclusion, owning a pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03928571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91480868907 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0240996598 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276336664811 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101359658457 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182806275392 0.0667982634062 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256262464427 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.375343775271 0.056905535591 660% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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