Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smart phones and computers. What is the cause of this and what are some possible solutions?
In the Past-faced life, technological advancement is developing rapidly and becomes an essential need of humans. However, few aged persons, including our elderly, face problems using technological gadgets like laptops and smartphones, appearing as an obstacle these days, eventually. The upcoming article will discuss the reasons and the appropriate solutions that need to apply with the help of relevant illustrations.
Firstly, the primary cause behind this impediment of hardship in using technological assets that comes under consideration is probably the generation gap. In other words, the old-aged public is habitual of using older gadgets that were prevalent in their times such as landlines and other items and the advanced level assets need many knowledgeable skills to use them so, it is pretty difficult for them to change their monotony suddenly and make themselves comfortable in using that stuff. For example, a smartphone of various brands is trending these days that indulge so many functionalities including application software, which seems extremely hard for an old age person to use as he is not aware of them indeed. Thus, new technological material is updated enough to handle for an old-age public.
Nevertheless, there are possible solutions to resolve these issues, including advancement awareness and change in the environment. Specifically, children need to guide their parent about using upcoming technology-based items. Similarly, the authorized personnel should help their employers attain these items by introducing new computers into the official premises. For instance, in the banking sector, all paper works need to be done with the help of virtual data storage devices used in laptops and personal computers; as a result, employers can enhance their knowledge according to the new advancement with determination.
Lastly, after discussing the causes and looking forth of possible solutions, everyone has the right to learn about anything regardless of age; therefore, a family member and as well as colleagues in a business corporate ought to take responsibility to help an elderly and business persons in getting knowledgeable matter about uprising technological gadgets, which they use daily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.646884273 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11504302228 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614243323442 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4579441905 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.583333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15495440536 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595219500898 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225252713822 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892274064472 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207134421872 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.