Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
In today's era, a lot of parents free their children to conduct what their interests are and fulfill their demand completely. In my opinion, this is clearly bad way to grow children and it derives negative consequences for their older version.
In response to the first question, shaping children to be parents dependency is the reason of bad way to raise children. During the full assistance of children's need, they are getting used to hoping the same help in any case without their own effort. As a result, they cannot do even small things upon their lives unless parents give them aid. Buying an expensive toy, for instance, is easily obtained by children where they should feel the sense of effort for acquiring something they desire.
Regarding the impact of this parenting style, children will possess different value in other children. In other words, spoiled children will be called as the continuing method of parenting, whereas other people will understand how to deal with tough lives. Another possible effect is the bad trait of them is formed during their future lives. It is believed that being raised with a comfortable life will give thoughts not to face difficult lives. To illustrate, if the cycle of their lives changes into an opposite one, they are willing to do anything as their habit of conquering anything easily. Thereby doing such illegal deeds eventually.
In conclusion, though parents are able to ease children's lives by completing anything in glance, this parenting style is considered leading them to be dependent; furthermore, they - children's older generation - are seen different from others, in negative side, as well as are appearing bad attitude for having what they need most.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onsequences for their older version. In response to the first question, shaping...
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...om others, in negative side, as well as are appearing bad attitude for having what they need ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in any case, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5727271166 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.39945606 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51965422283 0.244688304435 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176182140939 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10817874297 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334022837335 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767532919282 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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