Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that older generations have rules of live to be considered in upcoming years. Some people opine how younger people should keep with old-fashioned way from their ancestor, whereas others assert youths to have their own way to face today's era. This essay will enlighten both of these views before reaching final conclusion.
On the one side, following the steps of previous life will derive some beneficial impacts. As it is well-known from the common words about: "Experience is the best teacher". The next generation of lives can analyze in detail about which things should be avoided and foresee the effect for them. Hence the way of living applying, applying elderly's thoughts, creates a paramount importance in long-term standard lives. For example, old people, at the past time, used to invest their money to land in order to earn handsome profit someday in the future.
In contrast, in terms of facing modern era, people should encourage the method whose compatibility is match today. It hampers someone if he, somehow, follows how old people stood for living. Taking roles in household, for instance, has changed differently, were girls still to be housewives, the curb towards females would become an issue owing to what is now can be free for women to choose their path. Moreover, clear thought about educational major is predicted not to have rigid perspective compared to prior. Many job vacancies in each field now can be opted by people with what educational background that they are willing to take. Back to decades ago, elderly recommended that future generations to be stable to focus an mathematics for the prime subjects to lead a well-paid job.
To conclude, both of these nations have an equal importance, elder's opinion can filter the worst scenario of lives in the following generation, yet it can be considered kindly about having an independent approach as long as it leads to better yield.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...voided and foresee the effect for them. Hence the way of living applying, applying el...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... lives. For example, old people, at the past time, used to invest their money to land in ...
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Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...uture generations to be stable to focus an mathematics for the prime subjects to l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71198151727 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659375 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3514519313 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17447875549 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549705559229 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471407335666 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100963569428 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565995835812 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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