Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Some people indeed have a permissive parenting style in bringing children up. From my perspective, it is not a good way and could lead to many serious consequences.
Concerning most parents' educational style, they tend to allow their children to do whatever they want without any limit. We could not deny that all parents always want to give their children all the best, such as international studying environment, state of the art technology, or valuable stuff to show love. Besides that, however, keeping children under strict discipline is extremely necessary. Young people should be educated that is nothing could be gained quickly without making a great effort, and parents should be able to reject any unreasonable demands of children. The only way for children to achieve their desires is by making an attempt by themselves or developing self-control.
Young people growing in a permissive parenting house could have some negative characters, one of which is to be a self-centered person. People who are spoiled and satisfied with demands could have difficulty in a team-working environment when they get older. They want to be a critical center in a team but lack sympathy and consideration of other members' needs. Moreover, these people also lack the self-determination ability because of the dependent lifestyle raised since they were younger, so that they hardly make important decisions by themselves.
In conclusion, parents should orient children to discover and allow them to develop their ability themselves. Hence, I can't entirely agree with the permissive style of parenting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21825396825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87950628362 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 252.0 20.2975951904 1242% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1315.0 106.682146367 1233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 252.0 20.7667163134 1213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 76.0 7.06120827912 1076% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461619983872 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.461619983872 0.084324248473 547% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256323936665 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080235657304 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.2 13.0946893788 987% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -192.76 50.2224549098 -384% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.8 11.3001002004 910% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.9 8.58950901804 232% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.8 10.1190380762 1016% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 103.0 10.7795591182 956% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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