Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Deforestation is a severe matter happing in many different nations worldwide and leads to considerably harmful effects on our environment. As individuals, we could take responsibility for using products that come from logging.
Trees have been fallen to produce many products such as houses, furniture, bags, paper, etc. Therefore, we should be less wasteful in the way we use these things. In terms of several paper products, they can be reused in our daily life. For example, the paper bag is often used for carrying dry goods, and then it should be utilized for the next shopping trips and used for other purposes in the house. Besides that, officers can print 2-side documents to minimize the usage of paper.
Also, recycling paper is another effective way to not being wasteful. All of the used things could be gathered then classified before sending to the recycling centers. Moreover, one of the most critical solutions is reducing unnecessary paper-based products in our daily lives. For instance, technology could be adapted to read books and newspapers instead of paper-based ones; documents could even be saved in computer's memory in lieu of being printed.
These actions may seem small but will be getting bigger soon in the long run, as long as people all are on the same page in saving our land from deforestation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ks and newspapers instead of paperbased ones documents could even be saved in comput...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62261304305 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 198.0 20.2975951904 975% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 981.0 106.682146367 920% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 198.0 20.7667163134 953% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 101.0 7.06120827912 1430% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142012053891 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142012053891 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098845964433 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106869959047 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 100.9 13.0946893788 771% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -129.49 50.2224549098 -258% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 80.5 11.3001002004 712% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.6 8.58950901804 205% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 81.2 10.1190380762 802% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 81.0 10.7795591182 751% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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