Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that museums should be free for the public because most of them are funded by the government, while there are some museums that charge an entrance fee. I believe that based on different circumstances, both situations can have some benefits.
*On the one hand, museums are symbol of a nation’s heritage and for each country the maintenance of its museums is very important. Museums are a bridge communication to narrow the generation gap, and they help people to enrich their knowledge about their history and ancestors. To achieve this, the governments of each country fund some public museums annually, which usually comes from people’s taxes. I agree with those who believe that it is natural to expect that museums not charge a fee. Without charge entrance fee people are more willing to go museums, and this kind of public places are more welcomed by people.
*On the other hand, charging people can be beneficial. Museums are supported by officials based on a limited budget, so if they want to keep up with other museums in the world, they have to spend more money for rebuilding and using some advanced technologies in order to attract people and tourists. For example, Madame Tussaud in London is the most popular art museum in the world. This museum is a renowned tourist attraction because some accomplished experts used new technologies for creating natural statues. The staff of Madame Tussaud offer people handsets for listening to detailed commentary about museum. Funding of such work needs more money than what the government gives them, so it is natural that they take admission price.
In conclusion, i believe that there is no clear answer for this question. Charging fees for museums entry depends on the situation and both conditions have their own benefits which are more than the disadvantages.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05245901639 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67826109719 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0437156572 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350356960193 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122832487282 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646608370373 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220511236917 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362570206854 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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