Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow the children to do what they want.
Is this a good way to raise children
It is argue that whether or not parents should respond to all children’s demand. While I agree that children under the age of one need to be indulgent due to their stronger family ties, I also believe that the older ones should be raise under some punishment
On the one hand, newborns are worth being indulgent in order to strengthen relationship between parents and children. It seems evident that parents should attempt to meet all the first-years baby’s demands because they do not have a clear awareness of the world. The more Unless the infants receive intensive parental care, they might not feel a sense of security and love in childhood. As a result, children ten to be alienated from each other and end up with low confidence and feeling sense of loveless in adulthood.
On the other hand, it would be counterproductive to overindulge the children from the age of toddler due to their shortage of money management skill and detrimental effects on society. First, since their wants and needs are always fulfilled, they are suppose to miss the time to learn how to tackle some inevitable penurious situations when entering adult life. For example, when children enter college gate and live far from home, they might find it sophisticated to reach the balance between living expenses and hobbies satisfying- related money. Secondly, inappropriate parenting style causing greedy personalities on child’s mindset, which can jeopardize the society in the future. For instance, a man who get used to taking money easily from his parents in childhood tends to do nothing but robbing properties when lacking of money.
All in all, although there are some acknowledge benefits of free parenting style, I strongly believe that parents should bring up their offsprings in a strict discipline.
- In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while other do not. What about your opinions on this? 89
- School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In many countries children are becoming overweight and unhealthy Some people think that the government should have the responsibility what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what estent do you agree with this statement? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: raised
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13898305085 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84474447012 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.692395961 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285038989909 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985371716511 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362919367881 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161850478952 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434959272697 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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