*Families who send their children to private schools should not required to pay taxes that support the state of education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Parents who send their children to private schools should pay taxes as a way of assisting the educational system of a state. In my opinion, i disagree that parents should pay taxes to help in the educational system of a state as they send their children to non government schools.
To start with, parents should pay all due taxes to contribute to schooling of other children in public schools because they have the financial capabilities to do so which common citizens can not afford. For instance,parents who have the money can pay high school fees for their children in private schools. This does not stop them from paying taxes to support the educational system. So families should pay taxes to support schools that are not private inrespect of what is been paid as school fees in private schools for their children.
Secondly, parents believed that all other expenses are been paid for in the private schools attended by the children. So they think that additional cost is not needed to assist public schools education. Such as, when private schools organise debates among their students, prizes to be won has been paid for by parents. So if such is done in public schools,parents will not want to pay extra tax to support and encourage them.
To sum up, i disagree that parents should pay taxes to support government schools even if they send their children to private schools. Because they have the money to pay for such school fees and other bills demanded from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82677165354 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55903089025 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1527410646 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447271965486 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205288540358 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136812990593 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317251237026 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127516085852 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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