some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre school age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids discuss both view and give opinion

People have different views about taking care of children of pre-school age . While some people think that Childcare center can bring the best services to children , I believe that members in family , especially , grandparents will have better skills to look after their kids when child’s parents go to work .
On the one hand , it can be argued that childcare services at the center will give many benefits to kids . There are several reason for this . Firstly , almost all centers often are educational organization, so teachers are trained with high qualification . For example , when the child is hurt , teachers can first aid quickly to save baby . Secondly , at the center , the children have opportunity to meet new friends and make friends that help the child have ability to communicate with others .
On the other hand , I agree with people who believe that members in a family such as grandparents make better care for their child . Firstly , I think that grandparents are people in family who have blood – relationship with children , so they love their kids more than others. therefore , they are often willing to spend more time to well – cherish their child than teachers in the center . Secondly , Grandparents are persons who have many skills and experiences to raise child . From past to nowadays , almost all Grandparents take care of children by their instinct . For instance , when ever the child cries suddenly ,Grandparents can understand that their child need somethings or is feeling hungry . Finally, when the children are raised at home, they receive a lot of love from their family . Later in life , I believe that these children will be aware of the value of a happy family .
In conclusion , the are convincing arguments both for and against childcare services, but I believe that family will better bring many good things to kids

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