People have different views about taking care of children of pre-school age . While some people think that Childcare center can bring the best services to children , I believe that members in family , especially , grandparents will have better skills to look after their kids when child’s parents go to work .
On the one hand , it can be argued that childcare services at the center will give many benefits to kids . There are several reason for this . Firstly , almost all centers often are educational organization, so teachers are trained with high qualification . For example , when the child is hurt , teachers can first aid quickly to save baby . Secondly , at the center , the children have opportunity to meet new friends and make friends that help the child have ability to communicate with others .
On the other hand , I agree with people who believe that members in a family such as grandparents make better care for their child . Firstly , I think that grandparents are people in family who have blood – relationship with children , so they love their kids more than others. therefore , they are often willing to spend more time to well – cherish their child than teachers in the center . Secondly , Grandparents are persons who have many skills and experiences to raise child . From past to nowadays , almost all Grandparents take care of children by their instinct . For instance , when ever the child cries suddenly ,Grandparents can understand that their child need somethings or is feeling hungry . Finally, when the children are raised at home, they receive a lot of love from their family . Later in life , I believe that these children will be aware of the value of a happy family .
In conclusion , the are convincing arguments both for and against childcare services, but I believe that family will better bring many good things to kids
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