In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is true that nowadays in some nations, schools are facing many problems from the behavior of students. There are various reasons for this, but several solutions can be taken to deal with the problem.
In my opinion, three main factors should be taken into consideration as the causes of students’ bad behavior. Firstly, today, each family usually only has one or two children so parents often not strict enough with their children so they can get whatever they want. Therefore, children don’t obey and accept the rule of family and school. Secondly, the bad behavior of students is caused by the teacher. When there are too many students in the classroom, teachers can not control students in the classroom. Sometimes, it is because the teacher’s classroom management skills are bad. Furthermore, teachers receive little support from schools. As a result, they can not control students. Finally, students‘ bad behavior is affected by celebrities. They imitate their idols without thinking of consequences. For example, they copy hair styles as same as their idol that not suitable for students
I believe that student’s behavior can certainly be improved if the following steps are taken. Firstly, parents are people who must set rules for children. Children must obey their parents . If children don’t obey, parents will use punishments to show that actions have consequences. Secondly, the schools need to reduce the number of students in the classroom to teachers can easily control their students. Moreover, the teacher should be trained good classroom management skills and parents also should be guided to use discipline techniques. Furthermore, teachers and parents need to improve communication to together raise children. Finally, famous people should act as role models.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for students ‘ bad behavior, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32247557003 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74097516358 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9227970087 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8095238095 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.619047619 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156248661036 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521898626743 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542155842702 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1225845843 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662928015616 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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