In some parts of the world, it's becoming increasingly popular to try to find out the history of their own family. why do you think people do this? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
In recent years, there has been a growing tendency that more and more people try to research the history of their own family. While there are a number of reasons behind this trend, I personally believe it to be a positive development.
To begin with, there are several explanations why people want to find out the origin of their family. Firstly, people more and more curious and care about themselves as well as their own roots. As a result, people take up doing an attempt to research about their origin perhaps they might have famous or wealthy ancestors in the past. Another reason is that by the growth of the internet in the modern world, people are encouraged to do research easier related to whatever they consider. Therefore, doing research on the history of their family would be attractive if many other people also do the same thing.
Furthermore, I am strongly convinced it to be a positive trend in society for the following reasons. In my view, researching about the root of family is a good way to educate children. For instance, children would learn more about history and the way how earlier generations lived in order to expand their horizons. Also, this helps maintain and develop the family’s traditions. Secondly, if being fortunate enough, people would have a an opportunity even to find family members those who are lost in touch or distant relatives that they have the chance to meet.
In conclusion, the phenomenon that people try to find out their own family's history is caused by several factors. It seems to me that it is obviously a positive movement.
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: a; an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86080586081 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60832611708 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4298300574 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270881248099 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932652044247 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633932865564 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164524474581 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617116593522 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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