In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is positive or negative?
Mankind is considerably by far the most intelligent creature of the greatest Almighty that has an enormous and persistently growing amount of curiosity innate as a natural instinct. Owing to this inquisitiveness and cognitive ability, they have been trying to peer into the window of history to unravel the roots of their family blood since time immemorial. I completely support this notion of investigating the family trees as ancestry helps to locate the reasons for certain hereditary diseases as well as to determine their history such as lifestyle, motivation and develops a sense of belongingness and self-awareness, and identity.
One of the major reasons to dive deeper to determine their ancestry is to discover the answers to many uncanny questions belonging to some medically challenged disorders. Recent research, for example, has revealed in nations like Pakistan where they have a tradition of getting married in the same bloodline, to be more clear, marriages among first cousins or sometimes among siblings resulted in various disorders among their offspring. Secondly, a thirst to know the unknown and trying to figure out self-identity are the other factors that can support this recent trend . Therefore, out of curiosity and to figure out a cure along with the reasons behind many hereditary health issues.
Moreover, as we all know history shapes the future and defines our present, therefore, finding strings to our ancestors will certainly add value to our future generations. For instance, many adopted kids find out about their birth parents only due to these online available ancestry family trees that satisfy them emotionally. As a result, we can always have a sense of togetherness, and self-respect.
To conclude, genealogy is certainly conducive for medical research as well as for the people of various demographics that want to discover the story of their ancestors so that future generations can have a feeling of belongingness and self-identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.035493506 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3632256284 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.454545455 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111167177635 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041371570961 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294216650681 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631233550358 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167401722386 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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