Q. Some people prefer to live in suburban areas while others want to live in metro cities. Which would you prefer to live?
It is undeniable to say that the trend of people migration to urban area from rural areas known as urbanisation has become a debatable topic since last few decades. Some camps considered to live in modern cities whereas other opine to stay in villages. This essay will discuss the benefits along with disadvantages of both
First and foremost, one of the significant reason of living in an urban area is the availability of modern facilities like internet, transport, hospitals, home delivery services, medical, malls , brands under one roof and many more sans them its hard to imagine one's life today. Moreover, metro cities has many multinational companies along with many other job opportunities which make them a more desirable place to live. Education facilities are also main attraction of the big cities which is highly essential for our kids.
On the other, Rural areas ensures healthy environment which is without pollution and excess noises which is really remarkable for sound health. Secondly, homemade healthy food and greenery helps an individual to cope the stress, pressure and depression of today's hard-core life. There is no traffic on the roads of suburban areas. Furthermore, stress free people have better life away from threats like murder, snatching and drugs.
To conclude,both areas rural and urban has some positive and negative impacts. With proper efforts, we can make both places equally livable such as improving the traffic and pollution problems of cities, moreover, by arranging modern facilities at villages we can improve both places.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-25 | richa123456 | 89 | view |
| 2019-03-23 | kaur g | 79 | view |
- Is modern education impossible without computers Which subjects can be better taught by using computers Are there parts of education that can t be taught utilizing computers 89
- Television services many functions Watching TV makes us relax We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs Besides TV can also be seen as a companion To what extent do you agree with this 55
- Q What effect do films and Television have on individual s way of life Give reasons and details to explain your answer 46
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered living'.
Suggestion: considered living
...opic since last few decades. Some camps considered to live in modern cities whereas other opine to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., home delivery services, medical, malls , brands under one roof and many more sa...
^^
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., medical, malls , brands under one roof and many more sans them its hard to imag...
^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...many more sans them its hard to imagine ones life today. Moreover, metro cities has ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is highly essential for our kids. On the other, Rural areas ensures health...
^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... individual to cope the stress, pressure and depression of todays hard-core life....
^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...urder, snatching and drugs. To conclude,both areas rural and urban has some positive...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.288 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70175927545 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7257309789 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19710529501 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710065065726 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557158298788 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106349816182 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433066225832 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.