Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Many people hold the view that capital punishment should be abolished because it is a cruel and unusual punishment while others maintain that this is necessary for a better society. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and offer my opinion.
On the one hand, it is clear that capital punishment would bring about a number of advantages. First and foremost, one of the main upsides of death penalty is that it deters criminals from murdering. For instance, numerous studies in the USA show a noticeable drop in murder rate in the months directly following any execution. Secondly, use of the death punishment prevents murders from killing again. Serial killers who are hardened as to be incapable of reform should be remove permanently from society before he or she continues to kill other innocent people.
On the other hand, death penalty can be considered unacceptable because of several reasons. Firstly, one of the biggest downsides of capital punishment is that it infringes human rights. Articulately, we have no rights to put someone to death, no matter what the crime is. Another disadvantage of death punishment is that innocent people can be killed of unfair sentence. A single mistaken execution of an innocent person, among no matter many thousands of cases, is enough to destroy our trust in the death penalty and in any judicial system that uses it.
To sum up, while capital punishment has a range of drawbacks such as violating human rights and unfair executions of guiltless people, it brings a number of merits: deterrent of major crimes and prevention of re-offending killers. After the final analysis, my own view is that the advantages of death penalty may outweigh its disadvantages.
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...enalty may outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09342560554 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81340201536 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8241461897 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32541618212 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110957621429 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596878079009 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196949840764 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502050943395 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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