Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Few individual supports the prime judiciary of execution for making a serious illegal act while the other believe that the financial penalty for present day crimes is unsatisfactory. There are couple of merits for death penalty and also some downside of it, which will be elaborated in the following section.
To date, the rate of criminal activities has been rising day-by-day as the technology advances and people of many countries show their curiosity in executing the rule of death penalty which has some benefits. In the first supporting point, there will be no risk of committing crime by the same person again and again if there is judicial execution in the nation which results in receding the threats of criminals among public. This will also helps in making the city clean (out of criminals). In addition, there will be less spending by the government, as the cost of feeding the prisoners and the salary given for the prison's guard or jailer will be reduced. This saved money could be invested in other activities as well. Hence, there several advantages of death sentence, few of them are recapitulated above.
However, there are numerous impediment of such judicial murder which are mostly related to emotion and human rights. For instance, If there will be an execution of innocent - which might became culprit because of some misunderstanding among the real one, and later found clean, the faith of judiciary among the mankind will decrease. Also, the human execution directly reflects the ultimate denial of human right which says 'Right Of Living'. It will be a violation of rules by the executor which was made by himself. Not only that, many religion believe that the right of birth and death is only for god and not for the human. Thus, all of this points recapitulates the downside of legal execution in the country.
In my opinion, it is good for executing the law of death sentence as it will completely clean the society and make it no criminals society. Moreover, it will create a threat among individuals that 'committing violent crime might be the cause of my end' and they will stay distance from the illegal activities. There will be less crimes like murder, rape, theft and so on.
In conclusion, there are couple of advantages of death penalty like no threat of criminals again and less spending by the government. In spite of some demerits like violation of human rights and execution of blameless individual I opine in the favor of judiciary death sentence as it will make the community out of crime.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90465116279 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62465607359 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1646126642 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197146067808 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676217899843 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583610518712 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13801582606 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520342192084 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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