Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Crime and punishment have been raising hot disputes since the beginning of civilization. While some people believe that death penalty is the only method for those who are responsible for heavy crime, others disagree with such opinion. Although I agree that capital punishment possesses some advantages I consider it should be abolished in all countries.
On the one hand, death penalty can reduce prison expences for government and prevent repeated offences. Detention of prisoners costs much money every year which could be spent on different purpopes. For example, one of the pricey budget item for many countries is ensuring the incarceration of prisoners. Additionally, those who realised from prison but who have not changed unlike will do it due to another imprisonment. However, the possible solution in this case might be a capital punishment. In other words, decreasing number of convicts helps authorities save money as well as stops hardened criminals.
On the other hand, court is led by people which can make mistakes and send suspects to jail by mistake. The judgement may be changed after finding new evidences unlike resurrection ones, who were killed. For instance, one man was justified after 35 years spent in prison when the DNA test denied he was the murder. If he had been exceeded, he would not be able to return to his family and continue living in freedom after acquittal. Thus, the number of accusing innocent people remains still to high to let condemn somebody to death.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that in spite of its obvious benefits, death penalty should be prohibited all around the world because of the high probability of error of judgement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime, others disagree with such opinion. Although I agree that capital punishment possess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17562724014 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75105424924 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659498207885 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5040486864 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235836249372 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071000009105 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774399319441 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145599413968 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888119008775 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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