Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Many people in many nations over the glob believe that death penalty must be first rule for those who commit crime, while on the other hand others think that those penalties are unacceptable in the societies. From my perspective their are more advantages over disadvantages of death penalty, because it will keep people away from crime and make them work hard to make their future brighter. I will discus it in details.
It seams clear that many are in favour of death punishment for those who commit serious crimes, where as it will reduce crime rates in every state and keep those people’s away from crime who are involve in doing it and also safe many people from being died every must introduce death punishment for those who commit crimes like rape, killing some one and many more. For example, Pakistan has introduce newly passed law that those will treat to death if some one has been found rapes a girls and their were two guys who caught while raping 8 year old girl, although they got henge to death as per governments rule. These strict laws can save our nation as well as our young stars.
In addition many people also think that capital punishments should not be contemporary societies because in many nations they don’t accept death penalty and appeal for their case again to look at it due to which time wastes and at the end they god bail for their crimes the committed. For instance, an article in news paper shows that a guy in Bangladesh, who killed his friend for money court announce his death penalty but he challenge the session court and reappear for the case somehow his got his bail this time, although many people came to know that after committing such crimes criminal can get bail which is not a good sign for a society. These rules can take every country to back seat in terms of law.
To sum up many thinks that advocating death order to criminals who commit crime is essential, while on the other hand other suggest that it must not be in societies. In my opinion death penalty must be the strict rule for every criminal because it will decrease the overall crime rate in nations. Thinking not about criminals life can save can peoples file.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60668380463 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18313839963 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519280205656 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.444307202 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4166666667 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387128786222 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133815351801 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107442415034 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250494646373 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343968193186 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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