There are beginning to become more and more crimes, but is a death penalty good or bad?I think a death penalty is way too harsh. Death penalties may be extreme, but there are also some good parts to it. 2 ways it is bad, is that the people who do the crimes, may have families, and the people may have good in them and may be able to make themselves better. 1 way a death penalty is good, is that it gets rid of the threat immediately.
Death penalties, in my opinion are not a good way to punish people. First of all, the person who commits the crimes may have children and a family. I once watched a documentary about a prison. There was an example of this, because almost the whole prison had children, and family waiting for them. If there was a death penalty, the children, and family would lose their son, father, or even husband.
Secondly, death penalties are not a fair way to treat crime doers, because they may be able to redeem themselves. The person who commited the crime, may feel very bad, and want to show the world that he, or she can become a good person. For example, many people who come out of prison, feels bad and eventually becomes a normal person living a normal life.
Although there are many reasons why death penalties are bad, there are also reasons it is good. One example is a terrorist attack, or a person shooting a gun and killing many people. The police would have to immediately kill the person, to keep them from doing more harm. People who have killed many lives may be dangerous, even when kept in prison.
I think getting rid of death penalties are the best. Death penalties can cause many harm, and heartbroken people. They keep crime doers from ever meeting their families again, and no chance of ever redeeming themselves. However, the death penalties can be good, to keep threats from high leveled assassins. Death penalties may be good at some point, but also is not good for many other reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...mes, but is a death penalty good or bad?I think a death penalty is way too harsh....
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun harm seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much harm', 'a good deal of harm'.
Suggestion: much harm; a good deal of harm
...are the best. Death penalties can cause many harm, and heartbroken people. They keep crim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51549295775 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27550195452 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478873239437 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 0.809619238477 1482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.047836684 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248979451466 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926500213528 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683014452252 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151469117828 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603623079852 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.