some people agree that, teacher should be strict with their student. other think that teachers with friendly approach will achieve better result. Discuss and give your own opinion.
Teachers are the backbone of the students life to make their career bright.Whereas, tutors should be harsh with their learner in the study campus. While other believed that teacher should be familiar approach to achieve good grade in their result. Here i would like to discuss both views with my own perceptions
There are manifold points to shore up my views, first and foremost, it would be fruitful for them that teacher should be strict with their students. for example, because of this children show their discipline,punctuality and sincerity in the classroom or in the front of teacher. which help them to uplift the standard of their personality as well as school.as a result ,it act as a stepping stone in children life to get progress by leaps and bounds to make their future bright.Moreover,they also get optimum opportunity to know the value of rules.For example,they do not indulge in bed activities and do not distract from their studies.which is beneficial for them to give their best result toward studies.
on the other hand, friendly approach could be fruitful to develop their thoughts and confidence. to exemplify, they can easily focus on their studies because there should be no fear of strictness by which they present their thoughts in front of tutor as well as their parents too. Last but not least, treating friendly allows them to improve their performance. For example, they can share their feelings,emotionally, financially and think related to their study or any other social work. as result being friendly with student should be beyond comparison to overcome from any situation.
To sum up,it is vividly say that, every coin has two aspects.but according to me being a friend with the student to know the moral value as well as they can easily present their feelings.
- These days yo children spend alot time usi ng computer ,tablets and smartphones.some people think that interoducing to technology at a young age is beneficial other believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games.Discuss both views and 61
- Some people want their country to host international sports event. While others belive that it brings more problems than benefits. Discuss and give your opnion. 56
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones . Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial .others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games. D 67
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones . Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial .others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games. D 67
- some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throuhout their courses 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
Teachers are the backbone of the students life to make their career bright.Wherea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...udents life to make their career bright.Whereas, tutors should be harsh with their lear...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...udents life to make their career bright.Whereas, tutors should be harsh with their lear...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with their learner in the study campus. While other believed that teacher should be f...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...chieve good grade in their result. Here i would like to discuss both views with m...
^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r should be strict with their students. for example, because of this children show ...
^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...their students. for example, because of this children show their discipline,punctual...
^^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , punctuality
...e of this children show their discipline,punctuality and sincerity in the classroom or in th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e classroom or in the front of teacher. which help them to uplift the standard of the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ersonality as well as school.as a result ,it act as a stepping stone in children l...
^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acts'?
Suggestion: acts
...ality as well as school.as a result ,it act as a stepping stone in children life to...
^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogress by leaps and bounds to make their future bright.Moreover,they also get opt...
^^
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...and bounds to make their future bright.Moreover,they also get optimum opportunity to kn...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ds to make their future bright.Moreover,they also get optimum opportunity to know th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... opportunity to know the value of rules.For example,they do not indulge in bed acti...
^^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...y to know the value of rules.For example,they do not indulge in bed activities and do...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ve their best result toward studies. on the other hand, friendly approach could...
^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... develop their thoughts and confidence. to exemplify, they can easily focus on the...
^^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be no fear of strictness by which they present their thoughts in front of tutor...
^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , emotionally
...r example, they can share their feelings,emotionally, financially and think related to their...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...o their study or any other social work. as result being friendly with student shou...
^^
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o their study or any other social work. as result being friendly with student shou...
^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...vercome from any situation. To sum up,it is vividly say that, every coin has two...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can easily present their feelings.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00667966264 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9499603051 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36261231962 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161471624999 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797108867181 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239571316788 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940842499654 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.