The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider ,the rich are getting richer and the poor are even more poorer what problems can this solution causes and suggest solutions.
It is true that,rich person become richer because he spent money our work and get good outcomes. However,the poor person feel fear to spend on work and he can not get mony so they become porer .if one can take risks own in future he may success in our life . Here ,i will discuse problems and solutions in following pharagraphs.
To embark with , it is universelly acknowledge that every stick has two cons . The person belongs to rich families those have huge money and they are always ready to take risks if they will invest on their business if those work success in future then they earn a lot money and fulfill all desires . Whereas,poor persons are worried about basic needs so they do not want to spend on works and those do not have source earn money so they become porer . Moreover,rich people's children have good education and they are able to do good job and poor do not have good education skills and may not face any kind of interview so they will not get job and limited only labour so it happened.
Nevertheless,government shold make stringent laws then we can tackle poverty related problems . If government provide jobs and provide equally education then everyone able to get job and earn money. The persons belongs to rich families they should responsible to our country people and invest some money neddy people and do charity then poor masses fulfill basics desires . Authorities should build new industry and provide job if people do work and earn good money then the able to give good education their children and those children with the help of study and easily clear any job interview and get job.
To sum up,undoughtedlly,the poor person and rich person become wider if government and rich people charity the povert will reduce
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Comments
Please read my eassy
Please read my eassy
There are some obvious errors
There are some obvious errors in your essay writing. You didn't put punctuation marks properly. Basically, there is space after a punctuation mark. But you don't have. like:
so they become porer .if one can...
should be:
so they become poor. If one can...
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also
don't put a space before a punctuation mark, like:
has two cons .
should be:
has two cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rich
It is true that,rich person become richer because he spent ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that,rich person become richer because he spent money our work and get good out...
^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... our work and get good outcomes. However,the poor person feel fear to spend on work ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to spend on work and he can not get mony so they become porer .if one can take ri...
^^
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e can not get mony so they become porer .if one can take risks own in future he m...
^^
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...own in future he may success in our life . Here ,i will discuse problems and solut...
^^
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...future he may success in our life . Here ,i will discuse problems and solutions in...
^^
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ture he may success in our life . Here ,i will discuse problems and solutions in ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...following pharagraphs. To embark with , it is universelly acknowledge that ever...
^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cknowledge that every stick has two cons . The person belongs to rich families tho...
^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and they are always ready to take risks if they will invest on their business if...
^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in future then they earn a lot money and fulfill all desires . Whereas,poor perso...
^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...arn a lot money and fulfill all desires . Whereas,poor persons are worried about ...
^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , poor
...money and fulfill all desires . Whereas,poor persons are worried about basic needs ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or persons are worried about basic needs so they do not want to spend on works an...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
...to spend on works and those do not have source earn money so they become porer . Mor...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd on works and those do not have source earn money so they become porer . Moreo...
^^
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and those do not have source earn money so they become porer . Moreover,rich peo...
^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...source earn money so they become porer . Moreover,rich peoples children have go...
^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rich
...n money so they become porer . Moreover,rich peoples children have good education ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e porer . Moreover,rich peoples children have good education and they are able t...
^^
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch peoples children have good education and they are able to do good job and poo...
^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...y labour so it happened. Nevertheless,government shold make stringent laws then we can t...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n we can tackle poverty related problems . If government provide jobs and provide ...
^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'belong'.
Suggestion: belong
... to get job and earn money. The persons belongs to rich families they should responsibl...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... then poor masses fulfill basics desires . Authorities should build new industry a...
^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , undoughtedlly
... job interview and get job. To sum up,undoughtedlly,the poor person and rich person become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, kind of, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77302631579 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64558913319 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480263157895 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4622460597 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167443255359 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764036740948 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576639531661 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139434144579 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637161272418 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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