Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people hold a belief that females should play an equal role in the police forces or army, others are of the opinion that women do not have suitable features to be employed in these majors. Both these schools of thought hold valid arguments. This essay will take both sides into consideration and give explanations why I would concur that women need to be accepted and treated equally with men in these sectors.
On the one hand, the natural role of reproduction and inferior biologically physical strength are two principal deterrents to females’ participation in military or police forces. According to biologists, men are proven to be superior to their female counterparts in terms of physical power and durability, thus resulting in their dominance in the fields of the army, which requires a great deal of physical strength. Besides, women must have a proper duration for maternity, which might have adverse effects on their work performance. This is derived from their natural role of giving birth to children.
On the other hand, these negligible disadvantages can be minimized by adopting physical training and a special diet and utilizing surrogacy. For example, recent research carried out by the National Institute of Health in Vietnam has indicated that frequent fitness training has positive impacts on women’s muscles and durability. Moreover, women do possess unique feminine traits that are indispensable to be in the line of police or officers. Take Mata Hari, for illustration, who contributed to the French failures as one of the most exemplary spies in history. Her traits such as tenderness and understanding, which are one of the imperative virtues for being a militant in the intelligence agency, are one of the keys to her success.
In conclusion, as for the aforementioned reasons, despite having minimal biological obstacles, my verdict is that females deserve equality in police or military forces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...equality in police or military forces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29260450161 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94689928972 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8965768835 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263310777325 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842558266436 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840383896242 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148562731441 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901152121148 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.