Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people hold a belief that females should be given the same responsibilities in the armed force, others are of the opinion that women do not have suitable features to be employed in these majors. Both these schools of thought hold valid arguments. This essay will take both sides into consideration and give explanations why I would concur that women need to be accepted and treated equally in these sectors.
On the one hand, the natural role of reproduction and inferior biologically physical strength are two principal deterrents to females’ participation in military or police forces. According to biologists, men are proven to be superior to their female counterparts in terms of physical power and durability, thus resulting in their dominance in the fields of the army, which requires a great deal of toughness and stamina. Besides, women have to confront significant obstacles fulfilling their careers during their pregnancy and motherhood, which might explain the lack of female participation in such professions. Consequently, I believe that this work is somehow unsuitable for women.
On the other hand, I think that it is undeniable that women do possess unique feminine traits to meet special demands of the armed force and methods to minimize the drawbacks above. Initially, women have female characteristics that are indispensable to be in the line of police or officers. Take Mata Hari, for illustration, who contributed to the French failures as one of the most exemplary spies in history. From my perspective, her tenderness and understanding, which are regarded as one of the imperative virtues for being a militant in the intelligence agency, are one of the keys to her success. Moreover, their negligible disadvantages can be minimized by adopting physical training and a special diet. For example, recent research carried out by the National Institute of Health in Vietnam has indicated that frequent fitness training has positive impacts on women’s muscles and durability. Therefore I firmly believe that women can be equally qualified for military or police forces.
In conclusion, as for the aforementioned reasons, despite having minimal biological obstacles, my verdict is that the females deserve equality in police or military forces due to their unique feminine traits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07716222579 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1352276982 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.866666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267348451326 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926637001161 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084212882956 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148937460117 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354151986254 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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