There are different views about the type of people who can achieve big reward in sport competitions. Some people think that individuals and teams who have a nature talent in sport can win big things, while people who bear a strong mind and determination can win anything despite their lack of talent are the target of the opposite view. In reality, both of this view make sense.
People who were born with a nature gift of sport can achieve medals easier than ordinary people. There are many examples of this argument. Usain Bolt is the lightning in athletics. He has a perfect height and body form. His leg is also thin and smooth which can help him sprint easily and finish at top position. Being born with this wonderful body, great technique, he doesn't need to work too hard to achieve great things. In tennis, Federer is a prodigy. His smooth movement, his back-hand, his insane tactics, all come to him when he was young. In addition, we have Lin Dan in badminton, Pele in football. Each of them has some skills that don't need to be trained or directed, they come to them naturally. And we can see how successful they are in their fields. People who have talent and know it always have a more comfortable life than others.
However, as Thomas Edison has quoted, genius was born 1% luck, and 99% hard work. If you love something, just try days by days, even you aren't good at it, you still can achieve success. People who were born as a genius account for a low percentage, mainly we achieve success through training with a strong will. Messi before becoming a world-class player had a hard time of not being accepted in any youth teams because of his low height and disease. However, he didn't quit. Instead of that, he tried to improve himself each day and patiently showed his talent to the recruiter who finally admitted him to the team. The rest of the story is legend.
In closing, we pay more respect and admiration for people who have a strong effort in the sport they are chasing. It will be a great story to tell for our descendants. Because, we always keep moving forward to a brighter future!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55905511811 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34490603874 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9906773162 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.48 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.24 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204006272209 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472500035754 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620229800846 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12984656367 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800736283758 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.