Some people argue that the government should spend more money on educating science. However, others believe that there are some subjects are more important. What extent do you agree or disagree?
How to use government funding appropriately is always a heated topic among the public. Some folks state that more government capital should be invested in science education while others are holding opposite opinions. This essay will argue why governments should fund all subjects instead of science only.
On the one hand, it is true that science plays an important role in the global village. Funding science education will eventually improve people’s lives dramatically which not only individuals but also nations involved. For instance, chemical research may be improved if capital from government funding has been increased. This will lead to positive outcomes like many diseases may cure as well as more scientists are cultivated. Additionally, leading science will also enhance nations’ competitiveness in the globalization. Thus, in order to sustain the economic prosperity and improving living standard that investing more capital in science seems like a necessary task.
On the other hand, despite science is significant in modern society, it does not mean that other subjects are unnecessary. Art and crafts which enriching people’s mental as well as life experience. For example, watching a movie or listening to music after one-day stressful working could certainly help people to relax and enrich their emotions. Besides, without the crafts individuals’ lives may suffer. If more money invests in such subject will encourage people to create more convenient crafts which is beneficial to all the residents.
In conclusion, although it seems like science is increasingly important in recent age, the importance of other subjects cannot be ignored. Personally, I strongly agree with governments should invest in all subjects, not for science solely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fts individuals' lives may suffer. If more money invests in such subject will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68773234201 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0240761715 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4751717364 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204427878856 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662434590027 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667994048738 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133308217876 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608892075673 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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