It is true that lack of nourishment from their parents always effects on children's habit. Sometimes they do unusual behavior to their friends or family. Therefore, some people believe that their parents must be more careful and punish their children for awful actions. I demonstrate my opinion in terms of their unusual activity like hurting someone and some undesirable doing.
Although children always show excitement fighting with their friend as a matter of fun, it is not acceptable if they do it from racism and rudeness to someone. Sometimes, they try to avoid their classmates or neighbors because of their different culture, language, the color of their body. Therefore, they abuse them as well as fight with them to stay away from them. In addition, disobeying their seniors also a concern which may reflect on society in the future. Here, their parents should take some steps for their unusual activities, it may be the punishment which makes him guilty about their activity.
An indulgent parent also a reason for their children wrongdoing. They become careless in spite of some awful activity like stealing or lying to someone. Though some children acknowledge the result of theft, they do it over and over. Because of their parents being lenient, they may encounter some criminal activities. Therefore, parents need to be more conscious of what their children are doing a punishment which is not to hurt them but to teach about what is right or wrong.
In conclusion, naughtiness is a typical characteristic of children though sometimes it may be inappropriate for them. Punishment always cannot be a solution, it became necessary for the future of their children. Overall, parents should spend more time with their infant and teach them about their obligation and responsibility to society as well as the country.
- Some people argue that if children behave badly , their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behaviour of their children . Do you agree or disagree ?? 61
- Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant s criminal record This protects the person who is being accused of the crime Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14715719064 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71042533953 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8393538185 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458730308364 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173018672791 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976201958322 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331149159625 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248803272884 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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