At the present time, many people believe that working in our favorite job is very important but others think that how much money you will get is the most important thing from our job. In my point of view, I totally agreed with the second opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both view and show my own view.
On the one hand, liking the job has many advantages in mentally. For example, you will feel comfortable instead of stress while you do the job that you like very much. As a result, you can do your job the whole day without feeling tired or bored. Secondly, you can work hard on your job and try your best tp advance in the career so that to become successful.
However, on the other hand, there are a lot of jobs that cannot help you make a living therefpre ypu have to do the high salary job which you don't interested in. For instance, when you have a well-paying job, you can buy gifts for your colleagues and friends. This will make you become more friendly in the eyes of others and increase their trust in you. In addition, you may also go on an expensive holiday organized by the business.
In conclusion, liking the job is impotant to work effectively. Nevertheless, high salary job is more important than normal job and it bring us many benefits in both mentally and financially
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ave to do the high salary job which you dont interested in. For instance, when you h...
^^^^
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...s more important than normal job and it bring us many benefits in both mentally and f...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3832604884 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2942878378 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219315024001 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083544060323 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539808899218 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147501276036 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577961536616 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ave to do the high salary job which you dont interested in. For instance, when you h...
^^^^
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...s more important than normal job and it bring us many benefits in both mentally and f...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3832604884 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2942878378 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219315024001 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083544060323 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539808899218 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147501276036 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577961536616 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.